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Desert Planet by CommanderEVE Desert Planet by CommanderEVE
This one was made completely by GIMP 2.6 it took me about 3 hours to make.

Asteroids where made by :iconchriscold:
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The blues in this are very vibrant and eye-catching. It's what attracted me to this piece.

I like this composition, but a couple things seem a tad off.

That planet has an eclipse thing going on. The glow around the contour of the planet should be equal on both sides of the star. The planet looks like it is lit more from the bottom, but there are no other stars under it to lend to that idea, thus it looks like it's pasted onto a star background.

The asteroids also lack depth. They look like they are all on the same plane, none of them recede into the background, none of them come out further from the others. I suggest trying an atmospheric fog look, which is to lighten the overall color of the object to make it recede. I also agree with the person who suggested to tint them blue. At least give them a blue light source.
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CutieDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Soo shiny and cool.
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you! It's a very old piece of work that is though. O:
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CutieDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
your welcome. It's really good though.
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JustinDeRosa Featured By Owner May 8, 2010   Photographer
awesome
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Student General Artist
Thank you for your comment! I love saying awesome too. LOL
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JustinDeRosa Featured By Owner May 9, 2010   Photographer
yeah its one of my favorite words!
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner May 10, 2010  Student General Artist
Mine too. :D *High Five*
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JustinDeRosa Featured By Owner May 10, 2010   Photographer
:highfive:
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner May 10, 2010  Student General Artist
Yay!
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JustinDeRosa Featured By Owner May 10, 2010   Photographer
:boogie:
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